Edited Lines from my Notebook

If life was a dark
stage lit by the folly
of man,

Then what is the use
of speaking out or holding back?

Life will pass like a candle
blown out.

I come to see your ghost
lost in the forest of time

and your voice.

The night has not conquered your eyes;
though the sun never dawned in them,

The spark from your tears conforms
what I fear.

3 comments:

mythopolis said...

My first felt response was simply 'Wow!' And then I re-read it, and thought, 'Wow!'.

Dorothy Explor'r said...

mythopolis took the word from my brain..!

wow.

Salah said...

Thank you Dorothy for stopping by and reading my blog. Have a good day.